the bark and the scarf

yeah, at long last i found this on my computer did this for university in one of my earlier studies. the task was to mix up to things with different, at best contrary, material. i chose a bark and a shining scarf. in my opinion it looked good at the end but my teacher said just "it's bad"... he hasn't got much savvy

it's just made with pencils and normal paper, nothing special

what did you think about???